Person 1
1. Add some padding at the bottom
2. remove spacing between time and time labels
3. Weird titling, put on same line?
4. first instruction widow letter C
5. color hierarchy
6. make it pop
7. integrate the red orange color throughout page, titling?
8. footer giving credit to photo and recipe can be in green
Person 2
1. weird treatment for CHEESY
2. ingredients in bullet points?
3. more pictures
4. colors for subtitles
5. bring time over to left
6. center picture?
7. increase spacing between prep time and picture